sweet

this is pretty cool
one of the best ive seen

great

great great great

gnarly

one word to rule them all

you can kill the dudes

but not destroy the castle

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hmmm

yall copped this beat, the hook was already on it
so, no props for the cleanness
this whole concept is outplayed,
the lyrics need work
anyone can rhyme "haters boy" with "later boy"
step it up

okay...

props for trying
Good things
...

bad things
its A B.I.G BEAT, you don't freestyle over that
nonononnoono
also
the mic quality, as you said...is wack
sorry man, but do NOT
NOT, rap over biggie
lyrics are decent

dude

the juggalo clown thing, has been done
a lot
...i mean A LOT
i did it way back
I did trax with kidcrusher and mars
but
with the state of the world nowadays
with war and 2012
people want positive vibes
its good
but, try a different angle
if you want dark rap,
rap about someone else doing these dark things
and you witnessing them
just give it a thought

is this freehand?

its obviously very different and abstract
the creativity of it all astounds me

PROS
-creativity
-shading is amazing, not too heavy
-this is a piece you could look at for a while and still no capture everything

Cons
-it would be better if it had a background
-color would also be a plus

OVERALL
a GREAT piece, i would like to see some digital animation done with it, maybe color it digitally, and add some vector art.
i like it, make more

Casey Jones

I love it

you should NEVER stop with your art
take it and keep going
please

and i think it would be amazing to see a "gangsta" version of this lil guy